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| RAKSIYA |
Posted
on 20-Mar-03 11:07 AM
Shy, maybe. Naive? Of course! But I think my heart is broken. My hands shake and my head hangs heavy. I wish to mourn forever. before that, I predict the melt of snow; my fallen heart will melt it low. Love is true and all its endlessness; I have seen its miracle. Twinkling big eyes, bangs curled at the forehead, that my friends, is my ideal women.
I wake in my chair shivering. 4 a.m. I wonder what she is thinkig. How could I do this? Is she smiling>? I could only hope. Taking deep breaths doesn't help. I am love sick in regret! Rewgret!!???
HOw could I stooped so low?
Relationship break-ups are so challenging. Where do lonely hearts come from? I suppose they just appeared- like dust on furniture.
So symbolically, I continue writing. This time on a dusty surface, marking with finger upon the powders. So you sailed away on a grey sky morning. Nothing is the same no more. Dont want you back; you were just the best I had. You dont need me back; you were just the best I had. As friends we should be, so ask, please forgive me. I love you forever&..
Above is my example of an end to attachment, not an end to adoration. Love is different for everyone. Love can be social, as well personal. Sometimes, love is like a favorite song, never to grow old staying fresh as the first time listening. Though, love maybe a feeling to get used to. People argue of love to have meaning at all. So, if love ends. What good came out, but one or two hearts broken? If lucky, one or two lessons learned at that. Nevertheless, bouts with love should never be exploited, never be judged, not contain spiteful thoughts thereafter.
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 20-Mar-03 02:27 PM
Title matra herda ta...feri tei jhaar-paat love story ayo bhanthaneko...
Dil kholera lekhe chhou...nice!
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| eminem8 |
Posted
on 20-Mar-03 08:58 PM
I dont know man, maybe my english aint good enough, but i couldnt figure heads or tails out of your story.
Just that you didnt want her no more. If that is the case, then any chance i could hook up with her. You seem to be able to make it happen. "I dont want you back......",
sounds like, "..........this football is old, i dont want it anymore".
Well, give it to me, then man, i aint got a football to kick around.
Know what i'm sayin............
Shady
P.S.
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| Raksiya |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 08:11 AM
Poonte,
Thanks for the first comment that nobody else did. Dil ta kholeko nai ho, tara alik ramrari khulena.
Eminem,
This article just have body, no head...no tail. So, you better loose yourself in music!!
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| Raksiya |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 08:13 AM
correction- just have body = just has a body
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 09:04 AM
Raksiya:
Very expressive! Nice writing there!
It is NOT what happens to you but how you come out of it!....Do you choose to live with Grace or in Spite! The spiteful are driven by their own demons and the graceful "let it be"!
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 12:08 PM
raksiya,
dil kholna ta garho cha ni.........pheri dil kholi nai sake pachi, pheri silai garera tal tul garna ni ta garho ni, hoina ra ;)
aroo ta tyai ho hai>> jus out of curiosity, waking up shivering at 4 am? damnnn....i haven't seen 7 o clock morning for quite some time now.eeheh..........yah....i often go to bed around 4 am though ;)
nice piece, enjoyed it........
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| Raksiya |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 12:18 PM
Sitara and Oys,
Thank you for your unexpected responses. To be honest, the above writing partly comes from my own past. What I said there was, "love should never be exploited, never be judged, not contain spiteful thoughts thereafter". I have said everything there. Still, I myself trying to figure out if something missing here since Eminem said he says there's no tail or head in this writing.
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 12:19 PM
aaba biralo ho ra head ra tail huna lai?
eminem is high on crack and alcohol and probably COMFORTABLY NUMB!! eheh what does he know bout where his head and tail? is
Oys
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| eminem8 |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 01:04 PM
My apolozies to the author if he was offended in any way. My grasp of English language might not have been good enough.
ANyways, that was a good one chill.............but i'd rather be 'comfortably numb', than wake up in chair shivering at 4.
Been there, done that, and dont plan to repeat it again.
You guys should stay outa that emotional crap as well......
nothing but trouble.......
Shady
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