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| shirish |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 10:21 AM
After a long lapse of time, I got this mail in my mail box. I recognized immediately with its external appearance, Nepali kagaj ko kham and late King Birendras stamp.
This is what it read&
Pyari Chori,
Tan amrica gako pani teen barsa bhanda badi bhai sake cha. Mero kura ali suni dine bujhi dine bhanya tain auti thiiish aja tan pani nahunda sarai naramaiilo lagi rahecha. Aru kura tyastai ho, tara tero bihe dhumdham sanga gari dina paye ananda sanga marna paunthe hola. Bichar garesh. Umera dhalkidai cha, samaye ma bichar puryena bhane pachi garo parcha. Aja, talako pasale ta tero bihe teyhi bhai sakyo hola bhandai thiye. Amrica justo thauma jo sanga hide pani ke bho ra? bihe nai garnu parcha bhanne ke cha ra bhandai thiye? Paisa ta tanna kamaii sake hola bhando po rahecha. ma ta lajle ke garnu ke garnu bhayo.
Tero bau achel sandhai jhokryaera matra basi rahanchan. Eta uta chalna pani man gardainan. Din bhari yek pachi arko churot salkayera matra baschan. Badha risaune bhayechan. Asti tero sathi Dactor le endoscopy garere Andhra ma pual cha bhane. Yedi raksi ra churot nachodne ho bhane naramro huncha re. Ke garne Sanja pare pachi raksi nabhai hundaina budo lai. Mero kura ta patakkai sunne hoina. Ma yekli le ke mattai garne ho. Rat bhari khokera sutna pani didainan.
Tero jetha dai ra bhauju le yehan sarai hairan gari sakyo. Sabai jana bidesh gayo hami matra budha budhi ko sewa garera basna sakdainou bhanchan. Ghar jagga hami lai lekhi deu bhanna ayeka thiya dubai jana. Ahile ta yesto hepchan jhan ghar jagga diye pachi ke garne holen. Tero bau le pheri uniharu ka agadhi much pani kholna sakdainan. Huncha bhanera pathye. Mero matra masu khana janya cha. Pheri tyo Sitapaila ko jagga dhito ma halera rin jhikna lagayechan. Budha le pani khuru khuru auntha ko chap hali diyechan. Naya company kholne re,bijness garne re, tera daju le. Afis ma kaam garna sarai jhyau bhayo re.
Tainle amrica ma sunko gahana ke kaam bhanera chodera gaiish, teri bhauju lai party ma jaana chahiyo bhanera dhumdham. Maile nadiye pachi ta bolnai chodi tesle. Bhat pani pakaun manina. Nokar lai pani napaka bhanera ajha Bhatbhateni ma bazaar garna pathii. Tera dai pani pahile kati ghar ko barema bichar garthe, yeta uti garthe..ahile bihe gare pachi ta ke bhayeka hun kunni?..khali tehi swani ki matra kura sunchan. Afno kotha ma majha sita ke ke khanchan. Khoi ke bhanne tyo joitingre lai. Yeso bida ka din ma ki ta kotha ma baschan hoina bhane kach kach garna aaunchan, ki ta logne swasni motorcycle ma basera janchan.nakachari pani kati, pachibata angalo marna, duniya ko agadhi patakkai nalajaune pheri. Ajha, ghar kharcha chalaunu parcha bhanera pasal bata aune bahal pani sabai afai uthuchan. Malai ek paisa pani chuna didaina tyo dankini le. Tero bau lai raksi churot kinna mahina ma char panch saya ta tetikai lacha. Tarkari pani sasto sasto khojera pakauncha..bhanta bhane pachi tero bau lai man ni pardaina, talai thaha chadai cha ni..tehi matra pakauna lagauncha. Chamsur palungo pani pakauna bhanda sijan ho ra bhanera kasto hapkyo malai ta. Khoi teska kura garera sadhya chaina.
Austelia gayega tera maila daju le tehi ko kureni lai bihe garyo bhanera usko sathi Asok le asti Ason ma bhetda bhanyo. Kasto hole tyo pani. Bihe garna gharma ek choti sodna samma ta parthyo. Hamle ke hundaina bhanthyoun ra? Chod de abba tyesaka kura. Nepal samjhada tention huncha re tellai. Ke bhanya holan kunni? Chitthi patra phone pani gardaina. Tan ta kahile kahi kard bata phone garchas. Ajha astii ta teri bhauju le kotha bata sabi kura sunera baseko..malai tyo kastyo aftyaro ma pari tesle..
La parsi dekhi jatra suru hudaicha. Ramrari mana. Asti teri phupu kahan satya narayan ko dhalan gareka thiye, prasad rakhera pathayeko chu. Dhogera kha. Kokha pani badh. Kahile kahin phone gardai gar. khaire haru sita laspas nagar.
tanlai maya garnet teri ama
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 11:50 AM
shirish,
very moving and soul provoking. I am sure lot of us share this common ground, and many of us choose to ignore it. I read it twice. A soft, vivid MOTHER's voice beckoning. Out of curiosity, jus wanted to ask you, what did you do/think after you read the letter, provided it was the original letter :)
U sprouted back the supressed nostalgic feelings once again! keep 'em coming
Oys
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| jira |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 11:54 AM
I am treating this as if it were a true letter.
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| shirish |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 01:20 PM
this is totally a imaginative piece. Kasai ko jeeven ma mel khana gaye samyog matra thannu hola.
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| sks |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 01:26 PM
damn! I could've sworn this was for real!
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 01:43 PM
Maile pani saanchiko bhan thaanera aankha nai rassai sakya...
kyarni aba? tyo ali kati jhareko aanshu khera faalnu bhanda talu ma dalum ki? ali ali bhaye ni kapal umranthyo ki?
Je hos, imaginery bhayeni khub ghat laagdo lekhnu bhayechha...tyo Nepali kaagaj ko kassam...dheraiko waastawik jindagi ma mel khayeko hunu parchha yo kaalpanik patra le...
:)
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| hehe |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 02:38 PM
shirish, good one. Keep up coming....
Aru pani eso lekhdai garesh hai
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| surya |
Posted
on 21-Mar-03 04:13 PM
Sacchai ho Shirish, very nice. Kasto poignant. Other than that, can we agree to collectively kick that dankini and joitingre's butts?
:)
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 22-Mar-03 09:47 AM
yestrai nai ho nepali jiwan.. reminded me of the first letter i got from my mom when i was in high school...
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 22-Mar-03 12:02 PM
eheh..malai ni euta letter yaad aayo.....amrika ma suru suru ma aaye pachi
"...........oys, ta gaako ni herda herdai 6 maina bhai sakecha...malai ta aroo kei hoina, tyo kali ra khairi sanga las pas garlas bhanne matrai dar lagcha.....ani arko kura sunn.....bahira teera jada, 20 dollar chai boki rakhnu, ani kaale le bato ma "paisa de" bhanyo bhane..hatta na patta, wallet kholera "linus dai" bhanera sabbai dinu......dherai hero napaltinu.....herr..kale sanga jhagada sagada nagarnu hai.....banduk sanduk ni bokchan re tinle ......."
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| psychodreamer |
Posted
on 22-Mar-03 12:27 PM
oys...lol
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| ??! |
Posted
on 27-Mar-03 12:43 PM
Ghar Gharki kahani bhane jasto reality chha... Ekchhin ta merai katha ho ki jasto lagyo ni... he he he
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