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| Dilasha |
Posted
on 29-Mar-03 02:11 PM
A gifted poet and a student at Bemidji State University, Uttam Adhikary has a great passion for Nepali language and poetry. Not all poets can recite as well as they write but I have found that Uttam has a knack of both writing and reciting poems- so well that audiences can be easily charmed and impressed. I was first acquainted with him at one of the programs last year where he recited three poems. Usually, I havent seen a lot of people enjoying contemporary recitals and many times I too have found most of them a tad boring but ever since I heard Uttams poems and his vibrant recitals, my perception has changed. Anyway, heres one of his compositions which I hope you would enjoy.
Bhaneko namane pachhi
Mayako pandhero bata auda unlai maya bharera lyauna bhaneko thiye,
tara unle ghrina ko ghada bharichhan.
Jeevan ko bhari aakalai nauthauna bhaneko thiye unle maninan,
aaja thala parichhan.
Sab-dhan chori badheko chha
Yatra ma youban ko ghaghana(youth) samhala bhaneko thiye
Unle pradarshan garichhan
Sadhuko bhidma daka pani hunchhan eklai nahinda bhaneko thiye
Unle maninan, aaja kasaiko shikar banichhan.
Mandir bata aauda unlai aastha bokera aauna bhaneko thiye
Tara, Unle asimit aakanshya odichhan
Sundaratako garba nagara bhaneko thiye
Unle maninan, aaja jeevan ra maran ko do-sandh ma parichhan.
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| ??! |
Posted
on 29-Mar-03 02:59 PM
Malai khubai man paryo. Dilashajyu, Aba Yaslai Yeso gare kaso hola?
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| PremPujari |
Posted
on 29-Mar-03 10:22 PM
nice!!!
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| MainBatti |
Posted
on 29-Mar-03 10:37 PM
WOW..That's a great poem. Thank you for bringing it to us Dilasha. And thanks, ??!, for putting that in Dewanaagiri script.
Although I am not a poet, here is a poem I wrote today and I dedicate this to you all. Pass the message to Uttam Adhikari as well. :)
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Tuhiro maa rumaliyeko raatmaa
Bholi bhandaa bhandai thankiyeka kitaabharumaa
Uhi eutaa prasna thiyo
Prasna ko uttar ma sanga thiyena
Kinabhane
Uttar bhitra arko prasna thiyo
Ra prasna ko uttar maa arko prasna thyo.
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Ti uttar bhitra kaa prasna haru
Kathin thiye; bujhna gaaro thiyo
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Ti prasna haru ko uttar ko khojimaa
Kaiyou kabitaa haru lekhiye
Lekh haru lekhiye
Pustak haru padhiye; sangkalan gariye
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Ti prasna haru ko jawaaf rupiyaa thiyena
Ti prasna haru ko jawaaf soundarya thiyena
Ti prasna haru ko jawaaf kewal moha thiyena
Na ta mrigatrisnaa nai thiyo
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Jaba sannataa chaauthyo
Jaba ekaanta milthyo
Taba huri chalthyo
Jawaaf kaa amsa haru dekhaa parthe
Kinabhane
Huri le batti ko jwaalaa hallaauthyo
Batti muni ko chaayaa ujjwal hunthyo
Uttar batti muni ko chhaayaamaa thiyo
Maile wori pari khojdai thiye
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Koutuhaltaa le simaa naagyo
Uttar kaa amsa haru dekhiye
Ani feri puriye
Thap kabitaa haru lekhiye
Thap pustak haru padhiye; sangkalan gariye
Yehi kram chalirahyo
Uni ekohoriyera heri rahin
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Aile naatak ko ante bhayeko chha
Jawaaf haru ta k ma sanga aile
Prasna haru nai chhainan
Kinabhane
Maile huri laai rokna sakina
Batti nibhyo
Batti sangai usko chhayaa pani haraayo
Ek cup raksi ko saachhi-twa maa
Unlaai bhutpurba ghosadaa gariyo
Meri MainBatti!
Bhawadiye,
"MainBatti never understood me"
MainBatti!
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