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| Deep |
Posted
on 03-Apr-03 09:52 AM
[Packed Tudikhel the comrade is on the Open Theater! Khula Manch-the hammer-sickle flag is fluttering! ]
Revolution revolution!
The comrade spoke.
Suntali- wife of comrade "gagan"
Clapped. Gagan was dead already.
Ma sahid ki swasni- Suntali le garba gari!
King and the suckers! Get out!
The comrade roared again.
Cheerers rocked the Open theatre!
We are the masters of our fate!
Thulkanchhi harsa bibhor bhai- asrudhara bahe!
Our symbol Hammer and the sickle!
The comrade pointed and thundered!
Dig your graves! Reactionaries!
Night is your refuge, our Sun is rising!
Comrade ki Jay Dambarele lakhau swor ma swor milayo.
Deceive us? Dare now!
No more exploitation! The comrade's fist hit the sky.
Peanut vendor from Bir hospital also clapped.
We are the people! We rule! The open theatre shook!
Comrade ta deuitai hun! Hawaldar pani kayal bho!
[Few months later -Packed Tudikhel again Shivratri the comrade is on the opposite platform -the other side of the open threatre Sahi Nepali Sainik Manch]
No hammer-sickle flag! But-
The symbol stood again! The hammer and the sickle!
The bowing comrade posed for the sickle!
Smiling King posed for the hammer!
Sri panch maharaja dhiraj ko
The comrade's fist hit the sky once again
"JAY"
"Paatakai"! man royo kankala sabda garera-
Suntali, Thulkanchhi, Dambare, ani Hawaldarko!
Tyai rooai pani thichi diyo sahi salami le!
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 03-Apr-03 10:28 AM
aaja pheri ka bata stayanarayna than pachadi yaad aayo jasto cha hamro Deep dailai..ka bata pheri kabita tira lagnu bhayecha..
tara bhavana prashasta cha kabitama..
Ani suntali,thaulkanchi, ani bharabhure haru roi matrai rahe ta deep dai.. baru tyo "Sindoor" dekhauna lageko bhaye hunthyo ki Jai nepal tira..
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 03-Apr-03 01:43 PM
Satire in poetry and irony in expression! Depicted well.
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| manju |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 02:32 PM
Very moving....... beautiful!
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| Bhinaju |
Posted
on 05-Apr-03 02:33 AM
Tathya katha bata aba thathya kavita tira legkoma badhai chha.
Tara, Deep timro lekhaima sandhai bhav hunchha.
*Mero b4 ma timro lekhaima politics dherai khusaune ho bhane mithas bhanga huna sakne sanka pani lagchha.
I prefer your independent Rachanaharu.
Just a comment, Never mind hai!
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