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| shirish |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 10:46 AM
Oho..sadhe panch bajna lagi sakecha&.euta arko did bitna thlyo. Achel ta din bitauna kai lagi matra ho jasto lagna thaleko cha. Harek biteko din ma afulai asajilo mahasus huna thaleko cha.
Gayetri aaune bela bho. Gayetri bharati mul ka dactar hun, ra chora ko naam Mike rakhe ka chan. Unka sriman pani bharati nai hun, tara chuttai baschan. Mike weekend ko bela ma matra buba kahan janchan.
Mike le khelauna bhuin bhari charera rakheko cha. Gayetri bahulaunche yesto dekhi bhane&milunu parcha ahile. Auta bacha ko baby sitting garda pani sara din samarpan garnu parcha. Mike ek chin bhuima basdaina, base pani uhi sanga kheli rahanu parcha. Aru yeta uta garne ek chin phursad pani hundaina.
Samagam ko anubhav chaina ma sanga, taipani bhujnai nasakine gari ma maa matrito salbalauncha bela bela ma. America aaune thulo raharle yoban latyaundai hinden; yeha aaye pachi apartment, bill ra rent tirne jogad mai samaya bityo. Anuhar ma chahurieka rekha haru dhekhina thaleko cha ahile. Stan hau jhollina thaleka chan. Hos ta cha tara samaya dherai agadhi badhi sakechan samaunai nasakne gari. Achamma lagcha, Mike lai maile affno dudh pani chusayeko chu, ma bhitra ko khuldule metauna!! Ma katai buhulayeko ta hoina justo lagcha! Afnai manasthi lai sanka garchu!!! Mike prati mero achakli maya jagdai ayeko cha din partidin. Usko moto gala rato hune gari myoaii khanchu. U nishanine gari angalo marchu. Maile yesto gareko man pardaina uslai, ma bata tadhina khojha.. hat le dhakelera bhagna khojcha. Tara pharkera merai kakh ma basna aaunu parcha uslai.
Ramra ramra luga lagaune, gadi chadna, sringar garne rahar pani nabhayeko hoina. Ti rahar pura garne thau ra samaya nai bhetiyena. Gayetri ka disigner luga haru ra makeup pani bela bela ma ma lagunchu..tetai ho justo lagcha khasai kunai farak chaina. Sayad luga haru lai pariprekshya le farak parcha, kasko lagi lagaiiyeka huna tesma farak parcha. Make up bhitra pani ma maa kunai naya umang ra sanchar paudina..ma jhan jhanai fung huna thaleki chu..afno roop ranga jhan jhan niko nalagna thaleko cha.
Mike lai bokda bokdai, bahira Gayetri ko gadi rokiyeko awaj sunchu. Usko jutta ko heel ko awaj sunchu&mero kandh ma nidaunai aanteko Mike chanakho huna thalcha. Dhoka khulne bittikai Mike, Mommy bahnera chicyuncha ra ma bata futkiyera jana khocha&.Mike mero hat bhata futkina thalyo&maile uslai bhuii ma rakhi diyen&Mike dagurdai Gayetri ko gunda ra tighralai hat le berna thalyo. Mike ma tira teshpachi farkidai farkiyena&..ma sanga bitayeko sara din usle birsiyo. Aja matrai hoina sadhai yestai garcha.
Sadhai bhanda aja arkai prakar ko niyasro pan le chopeko cha malai. Washington DC mathi ko badal jhanai kalo lageko cha. Mero afno Mike nabhayeko ma malai chatpati huna thaleko cha. Jindagi sanga bitrishna jagna thaleko cha.
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| ??! |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 11:02 AM
ehehehe shirshak khai? kasto udas lagne katha lekheko ni bahinile.... kasto peeda ni? afu umer dhalkyo.. matritwa salbalaunchha.... arkako bachcha herera din bitaunu cha..paisako lagi... garho..... yo bahini le arko shirishko foool lekhyo.. ehehe.. keep it up.
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 11:20 AM
Shirish Nice one, Keep on writing..jatti lekhdai gayo tetti ramro hundai jancha..Aajkal sajham naya naya anuhar haru le lekheko padhna paudna ramailo lagcha..
lekhai bhannu nai kunai bisahya- bisesh lai shabda ko rupma utarna saknu ho..ksaile tyo janma jatai payeka hunchan, kasailai nikai mehenet garnu parhca. tara dherailai lekhna man lagdaina, sakne nai bhaye pani..."fear of rejection" bhanincha ni..manam dhak lagnu..tara yek choti lekhna thale pachi na lekhi bashna garho huncha....tapaima lekhna sakne ramro pratibha dekheko chu...lekhadai janush..jhan jhan kharidai aauncha tapaiko pratibha..
sacchi..Shirish chora manche ki chori manche..bhanna man nalage nabhane pani huncha.. swashni manche ko manobhab shabadama utarane kam garho bhayko ..tara tapaile katti sahajai lekhan sakeko dekhera sodheko..
Aru pani jawash hai..
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 02:21 PM
Shirish, indeed a very good one like the first one! :)
malai ni achel, nepali ma lekhna maun lagcha.try ni garya ho ek choti..........tara purna lagena.......reading your peace, has encouraged me again to doodle out....tara ali busy chu eheh..
lau lau..aroo ni leknuhoss !
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| ??! |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 04:07 PM
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| hajurko_juhai |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 04:42 PM
shirish, aati ramro lagyo katha...
all stories doesnot need to have a happy ending ni haina ra??? and thanks to ??!for typing it in nepali, khai ke bhayeko nepali padna ra geet sunna matrai sunna manlagchha.. Deep shrestha ko haar raat sapani ma sunchhu, ra tesma jastai aaklai tolayera aatit lai biutauchhu.
hujur ko katha ko srikhala badha hudai jahos, hamile paddai garula...
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| khimu |
Posted
on 04-Apr-03 04:48 PM
Hey hajur juwai wuts up!
i heard last night tapai le meri chhori lai kkkk gardinu vo re
is that true damn you juwai don,t do anything without my permition hai
sirish ko katha ta rahe chha ni gajob ko
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 05-Apr-03 11:41 AM
Shirish jee,
Audhi maarmik bhayeni saandarvik "diary" lekhnu bhayechha. Katha ko prasanga le hridaya ma kathor prahar gareni muskaan rokna sakina...
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| jira |
Posted
on 05-Apr-03 12:39 PM
Sirish Jyu,
Katha atti nai ramro lagyo abum samaya sapechhya. Tapaiko kath haru aru ni padhna paiiyose..kahiley sanyoganta..kahiley biyoganta....Wonderful!
?? hazoor, tapiko nepali typing lay Roman acchyar padhna apthyaro lagney harulai ajhhai badhi rahat mileko cha. Typing in Nepali looks like a piece of cake to you. Typing nai fast bhayera ho ki are you using some kind of software to convert any english font into typical nepali font?.. Just curious..kinaki ajkaal dherrai software chan market ma..yasto software bhaye hami jasta najanney haruko lagi ta jhannai upawuyakta huncha.
Anyway..tapai lai pani mero dhannebaad for nepali rupantur.
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| manju |
Posted
on 05-Apr-03 01:17 PM
A comon story pictured in a captivated way.
Good work.
Keep up!!!
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| ??! |
Posted
on 05-Apr-03 02:11 PM
Jira hajoor,
Hat kai kamal bhannu parla.. Just got kantipur font downloaded in my computer ni hajoor.. tesai bata sabai kam chalchha.... perhaps the nepali unicode can help in your case.... try searching for nepali unicode and download at your own risk... ehehehe..
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 05-Apr-03 02:16 PM
Ho ta ni...bhannai birsechhu...thuikka mero saano magaj! ??! jyu lai muri muri dhyanyabaad Nepali ma type gari dinu bhayeko ma...
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| shirish |
Posted
on 07-Apr-03 06:27 AM
??! jyu,
bhada gun lagaidinu bho nepali ma type gari dinu bhayera!!
Dherai dherai dhanyabad.
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