dude..seriously? you've already used two other threads to post this song. now you're doing the same thing with a misleading title. i bet you posted this third time to get some thumbs up you didn't get on your previous two posts, but guess what? here's my thumbs down to you for posting same song multiple times and for using a misleading title.

jantare1 · Nov 3, 2011 10:41 AM

okay bro...i would like to critique on your song so that you may make better songs in the future: Good: 1. lyrics 2. patriotic, inspirational et al (cliche but still ...) 3. nice effort 4. better than L to da double O S E R type of song Bad: 1. stop fkin posting the same shit in different threads in sajha 2. stop with the fking accent  WTF is "सोehको  च"  it's "छोएको छ" for fks sakes, and words like "JeeBUN" why can;t it simply be Jeevan? 3. Stop with the cliched music, i have heard this riff and chords in thousands of nepali pop songs, move on There my 2 Simon Cowell cents.      Last edited: 03-Nov-11 11:57 AM

chaurey · Nov 3, 2011 11:28 AM

Ke bhako ho achel nepali lai Nickelblack le jasto kane ra gayepachi ma rockstar hunchu bhanchan ki ke ho. lyrics chahi chahi timro 2/4 padhne bhai le lekheko jasto ke ho testo. By the way I cant stand the whole video and has to shut it down in the middle.

Phiste · Nov 3, 2011 11:51 AM