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 दिल सुक्दा मनै निभ्यो संसार भो राती
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Posted on 12-16-07 10:31 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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दिल सुक्दा मनै निभ्यो संसार भो राती
आस्था दुख्दा मधूरो भो तिम्ले बाल्या बत्ती
सुन्दर घर अटाइयछ सपना मै कत्ती
संगीत नभाको गीत थ्यो कि तिम्ले लाको प्रिती


छाती भरी रोप्या, आशा गयो अब झरी
श्रदा नभा आधार रछ ,गयो आज मरी
टिल्पिलायर विश्वाश बग्यो आँखा वोरिपरी
पोइरो आ-ई थिची दियो खुशी सबै मारी


आर्का मनमा तिमी पस्दा डड्यो मेरो छाती
तिमी भन्दा को थ्यो र मेरो अरु साथी
नशा सँगइ भुलाई रछु सम्झनामा मात्ती
दिल दुक्दा मनै निभ्यो संसार भो राती


 
Posted on 12-24-07 6:53 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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टिल्पिलायर विश्वाश बग्यो आँखा वोरिपरी
पोइरो आ-ई थिची दियो खुशी सबै मारी

 Dil chhoyo.


 
Posted on 12-24-07 7:06 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 12-24-07 7:16 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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दिल दुक्दा मनै निभ्यो संसार भो राती

....Dil nai chhune raichha......ramro chhha Saathi....tara dukhi pani.

 
Posted on 12-24-07 7:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Man chhune kabita raichha. Aru pani lekhdai garnus ani tasdai garnus.


 
Posted on 12-25-07 1:17 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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मेरो रचनालाई मन पराइ दिनु भयकोमा सबैलाई धन्यवाद। आगामी दिनहरुमा फेरी पनि म प्रयास गर्ने छु।


 
Posted on 12-25-07 3:30 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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 very nice waka jyu, please keep on writing

Dipika


 
Posted on 12-27-07 8:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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wow,so sad and touching.
 
Posted on 12-27-07 9:59 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ooo god ! U so funny ,good jub.
 
Posted on 01-01-08 2:36 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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यहाँहरुको प्रेरणालाई उपहार मानी फेरी भाब रेखा कोर्ने छु,र यही मेरो पूजा हुनेछ

 


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