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 Facets of life
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Posted on 03-05-09 2:55 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Facets of life...

In a tideland, life feels like the roaring wave,
which crawls through its own ups and downs.
Wandering in the mirror, life turns into a journal,
encrypted with random smiles and frowns.

In an amusement park, life looks like a roller coaster;
it has its thrills, twists and turns.
In a hospital, life sounds like an ill patient,
looking for the cure of the maladies and burns.

In a stadium, life takes the form of a sport,
and it just depends on the game and how we play.
When insanity overwhelms, it drags into the fouls:
deceive, cheat, betray or even slay.

Any random day, life can feel like a blessing,
ill-fortuned next day might be, it turns into a curse.
When melancholy wraps up, life moves like a snail
but on a brighter day, it can run like a horse.

Life has its love but also injects its hatred.
Life can be given; life can be taken.
Life has its gentler touch but also has harder punch.
Few tranquil days and other days are shaken.

Life brings you on your knees in times of need,
disappoints you with gravel when you look for a gem.
Life brings you a lot of things, but in the end,
its all about what we do with them.

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Last edited: 05-Mar-09 02:57 PM

 
Posted on 03-05-09 3:06 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nepchu, it's another captivating piece and a mind opener too..all real and all true....ramro laagyo...keep up the good job...
 
Posted on 03-05-09 3:50 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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oh ho nepche!! ba baa kya poem!! nice nice.....but i thought in the end it all really didn't matter hoina ra?? :) :)


 
Posted on 03-05-09 4:03 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hey man, did you wrote by yourself?? Its amazing. If not give credit.
 
Posted on 03-05-09 9:08 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Guruji,

firti sawaari ko saath saathai kabita pani ? hawai jahaaj ma ke garum ke garum bhaako bela ko sirjana ho ki kya ho ?

ramro lagyo bhannu hunthyo, padekai chaina :-P

haha ....

 
Posted on 03-08-09 4:46 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Dipu,
thanks a ton for those invigorating words. Now, it's the time for one of your stories. What you say? :-)

Nails,
thanks a bunch for the support fuchchi, glad that you liked those lines.

Poon-Hill,
unfortunately, I am the culprit of jotting those verses.
Thank you very much for your supportive note.

freak_alien bro,
2-4 line lekheko thiye, hajur haru jasta pathak ko lagi bhanera yaha paskideko ni. Hawai jahak ma ta movie herdai ani sutdai furshad bhayena, kaha sirjana furnu ni. :-)  Na padherai bhaye pani kehi sabda paskidinu bhayekoma muri muri dhanyabaad

 
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I read this for one more time today. Trust me, I still am blown away by the words crafted even after two years of the original post has gone by when i frist came accross this one. Love it! even now and I do use some of the lines on myself as a reminder.

 
Posted on 07-24-11 1:34 PM     [Snapshot: 1974]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 नेपालको छोराले खैरेको भाषामा यस्तो राम्रो लेखेको !!! सुन्दर अति सुन्दर !

- चुर्से

 


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