Interesting. I am keeping my fingers crossed.

A keyhole view of the cluttered room but the objects in the room are always in order when looked selectively and individually.

Wow.. I hope this is to be continue... Loved it so far. I love the way you use words, I can picturize everything happening in my head. Hoping to read more soon!

Great narration...loved the way you have potrayed the stuffs. I can visualize the characters in front my words reading those words. Is there another part of the story? Looking forward to reading more from you.

here it comes again (O:

never-ending saga aaba budho hune bhayo PART-II ko inte-jaarma.

all i can say is you have done justice to each individual by eloquently portraying their-selves.

there is something coming hoina ta .. (O:

crafty, highly crafty...a high level skill in the details.. a masters' work on the lines...

i have read some of your stories before... you make standard of your own, beating the previous everytime.

waiting for more.

Reminded me of my first pet whom I used to call by his full name--middle and the last ones being my own . hahaha....

good going there. waiting eagerly for the next parts when the lil' fatty girl falls in love with Jeet I suppose hahaha...i need some music in the background as well.

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Wow...seriously wow. Brilliant write-up. Looking forward to reading part 2 soon.

I am now all curious about Mala Sarkar and Milou. I am  restlessly waiting. Amber, please come back soon.  

Amber, you are an excellent writer. I look forward to seeing your novels on the shelves of every bookstore I walk into.  First though, I am eager to read how this story continues...

नमस्ते!! (lately I've been doing this a lot)
 
bhakundebhut/rythm/thapap/somewhereondearth/yakku-धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद प्रोत्साहानाका शब्दहरुका लागी

nepalkochora- तिम्रो रचनाहरु राम्रो लाग्छ।सब्द च्यन्हरु बेजोद छन्।भावनाहरुलाई बहनदिनुपर्छ, होइन र?
lootekukur-भिन्न बीधामा लेख्छौ, प्रतिभासाली छौ।तर सरल्तामा सुन्दर्ता हुन्छ , होइन र?

sunnydev-धन्यवाद

arnico-धन्यवाद..

The "Last" Resort!  Enjoy 

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लेखिका महोदया,
सरलतामा सुन्दरता हुन्छ भन्ने कुरामा म पनि सत्प्रतिशत सहमत छु  तर यो कुरा कुन प्रसँगमा निस्केको हो भन्ने मेरो छुद्र कौतुहुल्तालाई मेटाउन यसमा केही प्रकाश पारीदिनु भएमा आभारी हुने थिए।

Samsara,
Nice song man. It had been a while I hadn't listen to that classic number from The Eagles. Thanks for sharing

लुटेकुकुर्- सर्लता मनोबैज्ञानीक सामिप्यता हो जुन मन मस्तिस्कलाई बिना कुनै द्विबिधा स्विकार्य हुन्छ।तर हरेकको भिन्न भिन्न हेराइ र भोगाई होलान एअस्स बिषयमा।आशा छ धेर ैकुराहरु छरलङ भ्एहोलान। प्रश्नको  लागि तिमीलाई  धन्यवाद।

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 wow!  enjoyed every single delicately crafted sentence-- willing to read more about the butterball m-mi-lou

Amber, तिमीलाई मेरो रचनाहरु राम्रो लागेको सुन्दा म हर्षले गदगद भए। भावनालाई अली कती भए पनि बग्न दिएर त त्यती भए पनि  लेख्न सकेको हुँ। भावनामा न बगी त लेख्नै गाह्रो हुन्छ नि हैन र? तिम्रो कथाहरु साह्रै बेजोड छन। कथाको बहाबमा बग्दै जादा कथा सकिएको पनि भान हुँदैन। यो कथाको बाकी भागहरु पनि चाडै पढ्न पाइयोस।

लेखिका महोदया,
सोचाइ प्रस्फुटन भएर विचारमा परिणत हुन समयको आवश्यक पर्छ जस्तो लाग्छ मलाई। र त्यो दौरानमा मान्छेको आफ्नै दिमागसँग स्वत: स्फुर्त वैचारिक द्वन्द गरिरहेको हुन्छ। एउटा असल विचारको बामे स्वरूप नग्न र अश्लील हुन सक्छ। उच्च र नीच विचारबीच पातलो रेखाको विभाजन पनि  हुन सक्छ।  असल बिचार राख्ने  र त्यस्लाई असल कृयाकलापमा रूपान्तरित गराउने हात मान्छेको  उच्च र नीच विचारबीचको भिन्नता बुझेर  सटिक न्याय दिनसक्ने क्ष्यमतामा भर पर्ने कुरा हो जस्तो लाग्छ मलाई।  फील फ्री टू डिसग्री

लेखिका ज्यूको यो कथानक चल्चित्रको शेष भाग को प्रतिक्ष्यामा कति बसन्त पार गर्नु पर्ने हो, जानकारी पाउनसके आभारी हुने थिए।

 The dual odd disorder charactors of the regalia guest with the Thakalis manches. Still in this

plateau stage you have resonance a beautiful and true Tibetans  presiding features

that formed a praised looks of a best package defining a ramro abroginals teenager

young boy- as the prince charm waiters.

Significantly known  with the magnificent turnips flower, apple,peach and apricot

trees, whoever be in the homeland of Thakali will surely fall in love and bother to

stay another moment more, as be like this once I looks to your interesting literatures...very nice !!

khoi???? wheres the rest?? i've been waiting for days.. waaaaaaaaaaaaa

.Dear Amber,

Anxiously waiting to hear more about the mysterious lives of Milou and Mala Sarkar that are unknown to the outside world! The very first paragraph is enticing to take a plunge into the story, great work!