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 ADITI- मैले आँफै सँग हारेको अर्को युद्ध

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Posted on 07-09-08 4:29 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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" की थालदै नथाल्नु, थाले पछी की सकौनु की सकीनु" मेरो बुवाले मेरो 'एस् एल की' उमेर ताक मलाई दीन टीप्स हरु मध्ये सधैं भरी साथ हुने बाणी शायद एही होला जस्तो लाग्छ।
नानु सँगको मेरो सम्बन्ध जुन रुप्ले अन्त्य भयो, त्यस्तो सँग कसैको सम्बन्ध न तुहीयोस। त्यो सम्बन्ध को अबसान पछी मैले जीन्दगी को यो पाटोलाई कहीले पुन समत्ने सोच आउला जस्तो लागेको थिएन मलाई। तर जीन्दगी सँग कस्को के लाग्दो रहेछ र ! म फेरी एक्पटक जीन्दगी सँग हार मान्ने संघरमा पुगेको छ।  भखर मात्र एउटा  खहरेले  गरेको बीनास महसुस गरेर नसकीदै अर्को बाढीले एसरी लाग्यो कि मैले पत्तो नै पाइन।
  अदीती हो उन्को नाम। मीनेसोटा बाट हावा खाएर बोस्टोन तर्फ उक्लीदै गर्दा अइ-२० पनि रद्दी कागज बराबर भइसकेको थीयो। एउटा साथीले दीएको नम्बर मा फोन गरेर "तपाइको पसल्मा काम छ? " भन्दा भोली पल्टै देखी सुरु गर्न भन्यो। मेरो प्रस्ट हीन्दी देखेर शाहु दङग परेको थियो पहीलो दीन्मै। झन पुर एक महीनको भारत भ्रमण को बारेमा सुने पछी त मेरो नाम छोडेर बेटा भनेर बोलाउन सुरु गर्‍यो। गएको एक हप्ता पनि नहुँदै  शाहुको घरमा एउटा भोज हुँदै थीयो। "she इज कलीङ एवेरी वन that शी नो। यू नो इट्स हर -२१ बर्थ डे।"  आफ्नी छोरी को २१औ जन्मदीन्को कुरा सुनौदै गर्द दङग थीयो स्रीनीवस बुढा। हुन पनि एक मात्र सन्तान। बेलुका छ बजे काम छुटेर घर गएर हतार हतार तयार हुँदा मैले एक महीना देखीको दारी काट्ने फुर्सद पाइन। घर नजीकै को चोकको एउटा पसल बाट एउटा बुके कीने अनी लागे बुढाको घर तीर।

" "congratulation on your 21st birthday अदिती" भनेर मैले भन्न नभ्युदै 'wow you look same to Saif' भनेर ले उन्ले मलाई हल्क हग गरिन र थ्यांक यू भनीन। बुढोले फोकट्मा खान त पक्कै बोलाको थीएन। मेरो काम उही बुफे म आउनेलाई " how many persons sir? plz come with मी" भन्ने जस्ताइ थीयो। खान राम्रो थीयो। अरु दुई चार जना ईन्डीयन केटा केटी हरु सँग पनि चीन-जान भयो । खान पीन को कार्यक्रम पछी हल्क नाच-गान पनि भयो। एही जन्मे हुर्केको भए पनि अदीती का अधीकान्स साथी हरु इनडीएन नै रहेछन। नाचीयो धोती रेमिक्स मा धेरै जना सँग। तेस दीन तेस्तै १२ बजैएको थीयो घर पुग्दा। फ्रीज खोलीयो, "september १३"लाई सम्झियो ४ बोतल सकैयो अनी सुतीयो।

भोली पल्ट मेरो अफ थीयो। बार बजे सम्म सुती राखेको थिए । फोन को vibration ले उठेको भनेपची धेरै नै आएछ जस्तो छ फोन। hello मात्रा के गरेको थिए उत बाट आवाज आयो don't lie to me, were you still sleeping? okay I am sorry to wake u up but pa wants you to come with me when I am going to play soccer टूडे" but I don't know driving he know that ।' मैले भने। तर उन्ले भनीन ' it doesn't matter, i will drive myself. he just wants someone to accompany me. just as my body guard i गेस भनीन अनी haasin .................

to be continued

 
Posted on 07-23-08 12:20 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank You Everyone for reading, liking and standing by my side.

Have a good day!

 
Posted on 07-23-08 12:50 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I hope u ll update more to let us know that Aditi is doing fine during treatment.
 
Posted on 07-23-08 6:19 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Oh my God ! I never imagined this kind of twist. Narayan bro, I am really sorry to hear what Aditi is going through. Our prayers are with her and you. I know she will win this battle.

This story won't end like this. We all hope that one day you will continue this story with a very happy ending. We are all looking for that day.

With Best Wishes,

Nas


 
Posted on 07-23-08 6:38 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Narane, It's sad to read this real story. Dont give up the hopes and do as much as you can for the goodness.

Thanks for sharing .


 
Posted on 02-27-17 12:14 PM     [Snapshot: 14596]     Reply [Subscribe]
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नारायण जी , ९ बर्ष पछि फेरी पढ्दै छु तपाईको कथा - दोहोर्याएर . खै त्यो बेला किन केहि लेखिन थाहा छैन तर आज लेख्दै छु जब शायद तपाई साझा मै हुनुहुन्न होला . अझै पनि सोध्न मनलाग्छ "अदितिलाइ कस्तो छ ?"
धुमिल आँखा, रसिलो मन लिएर पढे फेरी .
- थाहा छैन
 
Posted on 02-27-17 4:52 PM     [Snapshot: 14747]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Time flies so fast. It looks like I read this story not so long time ago, and it has been almost 9 years. Thanks Thahachaena for bumping this thread. I read this story once again. Narane bro never updated what happened later. JHow I wish it was a fiction but he clearly mentioned that it was true story. I know it has been long time, and Narane must have moved on .
 
Posted on 02-27-17 9:40 PM     [Snapshot: 14897]     Reply [Subscribe]
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मैले पनि फेरी पढें- उस्तै ताजा छ / तर किन किन मलाई अदितिको छोरा (अनार?) अबत ६ बर्षको भयो र १ क्लास मा जान्छ भनेर लेखेको पढ्न मन छ/ क्यार्ने होला?
 
Posted on 02-28-17 1:29 AM     [Snapshot: 15025]     Reply [Subscribe]
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मन छोयो यो तपाईंको लेखाइले। आसा छ सबै राम्रै भयो होला भन्नी।
पुरानो कथा पढ्न पाये, माथी ल्याउनु भकोमा धन्यवाद है।
 



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