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Posted on 12-15-10 3:53 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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IT FEELS LIKE GOING SOMEWHERE TO NO WHERE
LIFE SEEMS EXHAUSTED AND TIRED SOMEWHERE
THINGS DON;T MAKE SENSE IN THIS RIDE TO NO WHERE
LIFE SEEMS SO UNFAIR LEADING ME SOMEWHERE
REALLY CONFUSED WITH THIS WORD NO WHERE
IS THIS ANXIETY ONE FEELS IF GOING SOMEWHERE?

FEELS LIKE MISSING A TRAIN, EVERY TIME I WAKE
THINGS CAN;T BE TAKEN FOR GRANTED, AS I USED TO TAKE
I ALREADY FELT BURNED AND DOUBTED IF I CAN MAKE
SELF DOUBT IS A LEAST I EXPECT FOR GOD SAKE

MY INNER VOICE SEEMS SO STRONG AND  AWAKE
THAT;S WHY I BELIEVE I CAN MAKE
ROAD TO SOMEWHERE, WHICH I WILL TAKE.
 
Posted on 01-26-11 9:26 AM     [Snapshot: 335]     Reply [Subscribe]
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it's beautiful but incomplite.

I aint no pro
but
only 6-4-3 lines ... ?

It has Rhyme... please, continue it.


Wish you all the best.

Bye
 

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