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I do not see the column. Is it just me?

M.P.

I too pinched myself.

me neither!

"This is for comments on Kiran "

This is it. This is the column, and this is the pillar. Whatelse're you guys looking for. Do you have any comments on Kiran?

No? See you later, then.

:)

[kiran aamnu aghinai khalasi le dhyang dhyang garechha kyare---chhutyo chhutyo---ye diver dai!--]

what a retard I am.. I just found out where this column is!

Lolz you guys r funny! I saw the column, but everything looked alien to me, coz I donot have nepali font downloaded. Go to cloumns, you'll find it there. But if you don't have nepali font downloaded on ur computer, don't even bother to go there. Kasto padhne iccha thiyo 'kiran.' Padheko-padheai bho!

If you need Nepali font, you can get it from here:
- http://www.nepalipost.com/
It looks like the poem is in Preeti font.

Here is the link to the column if you have not found it yet:
- http://www.sajha.com/sajha/html/column.cfm?extraid=494

if you still do not see the Nepali text, i suggest you to do following:
Right click on the mouse->select Encoding>select User Defined

Hope this works and you are able to enjoy the poem.

Can anyone tell what "Chhanda" it is written on?

I received an e-mail Mr. H.N. Subedi explaning "Chhanda" of this poem. I am posting below for everyone's information (needs preeti font to view as discussed above):


of] æls/0fÆ sljtf ;|Uw/f xf] . ;dj[Q of] ;Uw/f 5Gbsf] k|To]s r/df @! cIf/ /xG5g\ . d / e g # o u0f x'G5g\ . $ u n @ u 5 n @u n @ u j0f{ s|dzM x'G5g\ / ;ftf} cIf/df la>fd x'g'k5{ . pbfx/0fM

cfdf Û hGd] lgzfdf cem slt lglzsf] cfo' w]/} /x]5 Û
/ft} /ftL latfof] arkg tgn] :jfb p:d} k/]5 .
cfof] d]/f] hjfgL k|s[ltl;t n8L sd{ ug]{ lbzf ef],
kfPF yfxf s;f]/L sdn ?k lng] jfª\doL of] lgzf ef] ..

poem ko spelling anyatha bhayeko ma xyama yachana swikarnu hola..

namaste

Chhandabadha kabita bhane pachhi ta manai hurukka hune. However, only Chhanda that I remember is ShardulBikridit. I am not sure whether I can read Sragdhara Chanda correctly or not. But, as IF suggested, I am printing it and reading it loudly...! Je ta paros!

I am reading YO SAMAJ mahakabya (published in nepalipost.com) from the same poet. Hope, I can get most of it!

Thanks for sharing the poems!!

It's indeed a beautiful poem!! Thanks for posting it.

*Chhandabadha kabita* reminds me of Dahal YagyaNidhi. I am a big fan of his. It's been 8 years since I last heard him but his style of *Kabita Bachan* is always in my ear.

Noname,

I will really appreciate if you can post a link to YO SAMAJ mahakabya. TIA!!

no problem...Bond
Here it is: http://www.nepalipost.com/epic.html

Sample of "ShardulBikridit" and "Shikharini" Chhanda from the same poet. Taken from newly published 'Sarga" of Yo Samaj Makavya at http://www.nepalipost.com



zfb"{nljs|Ll8t
e'G6] ef] ljjz} a;]/ 3/df 8'Ab} lyof] sh{df,
5f]/f] Ps lyof] c;fWo al9of 5f]/L t emg\ zLndf .
;f]Rof] nfx'/ u} 8'n]/ wg tf hDdf a8f ub{5g\,
uf]7\nfsf hg lhGbuL tn k/L tNnf] u/f k'Ub5g\ ..@..


lzvl/0fL
cxf] Û af]n]sL lyg\ k|s[lt ljr/f Kof/ lbnsf],
st} kf]Vg] Kof/f] s/sdndf y]Úg dw'/f] .
;'uGwL jf:gf Yof] j/ k/ ;a} l;/\ l;/ jtf;\,
rnL s]z} xNnL k'm/ k'm/ u/L kNna ldhf;\ ..%..

Chhandabadha Kavita Lovers,

Below is part of newly published 'Sarga" of "Yo Samaj" Mahakabya from same author at Nepalipost.com: http://www.nepalipost.com/epic.html

It is in "ShardulBikridit" chhanda according to the website.

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7"nf O{Zj/ s[i0fn] ;snsL 5f]/L a'xf/Lx¿,
s]xL aRg gbL u/] dgk/L uf]kL dhfn] c? .
o:tf of}glkkf;'sf zx/df r]nf eP wTo/L Û
dfnf xft e/L hkL v';v';] /fVg] dhfsf k/L ..@)..

k'qLsf ;xdf n'nf]let eP j|x\df ePsf hg,
5g\ cfbz{ oxfF ls jf lzj ptf 5g\ df]lxgLsf ;Fu .
ljåfg\ w]/ j[x:klt a'w ptf rGb|} ljrf/Lsg,
rf]vf] sf] 5 / Û ef/t}e/dxfF cGwf ePsf ug ..@!..

o:tfsf dgsf ljrf/ clg tf a9\tf l;sfO{ j/L,
tL jfT:ofog tf 8'n] wlgssf Kof/f eP s:t/L .
sfdf]GdQ eP/ g} g[kx? lgwf{x?sf tg,
rf/L cf;gsf u/] 9lndnL s:n] lauf¥of] eg ..@@..

cfof] qmflGt otf cxf] Û wlgssf] pBf]u /f]hL ljgf,
gfkmf ;f]g{ eof] dxf ;d/tf pTkfbg} jf;gf .
Sof a9\tf x'g u} lbbf c´ a9\of] ;+;f/df sfdgf,
h:sf kfq eP oxfF s';'d tf eGg] 5 ;+efjgf ..@#..

Hofb} lnKt eO{ ;/] clu wgL cfˆg} t tfst\ ;sL,
k};f]sf] /x/} u/La dlxnf km:y] dhfn] slt .
ef]sf bLg g/] a;L cln ptf nf} xLg y] a]ktf,
of}g} /f]u lnO{ lgnL y'se/L ?Gy] ljgf sfdsf ..@$..

of}gft[Kt s'g} s'g} hgx? ef/L ax]sf clt,
sfdL lnKt eO{ v;L dg'h tf gf;L /x]sf slt .
o:sf] x]t' stf < sxfF < lsg eof] ;f]Rb}g sf]xL a'w,
eG5g\ sfd'stf c/] dg'hsf] cfwf/zLnf ;a ..@%..

7"nf] ;fg' bof dof ;'vx¿ jf b'Mvdf g} klg,
k}nf] sf/0f xf] wg} clg otf lgdf{0f ;t\sf] klg .
sf]xL bfgj jf s'g} dg'htf af]sL /x]sf hg,
b|Jo}sf jzdf k/L km/ssf tTsfn x'Ggg\ < eg ..@^..

dfG5]sf :d/sf cg]s ljwtf b|Ao}x?n] oxfF,
s'07f jf ljs[t} u/L ;snsf] lgwf{l/t} 5g\ hxfF .
afFsL z]if s'g} eP dbgsf] ;fIfft\ ;/Lsf] 56f,
xf]nfg\ pQ/sf hafkm lbgdf sfdLkgf g} stf ..@&..

of}g}] dfgjtf ljif] hutdf ;Tx]t' efÚsf] eP,
of}g} j[lQ t Yof] cxf] Û s';'ddf h:n] tL dfG5] eP< .
jf ufO{ c?df w/L dg'htf b]V5f} eg] ;Tw[t] Û,
dfG5] 5g\ hgtf g tf kz' s'g} efÚsf s'g} b]V5' x} Û ..@*..


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